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whisper to me? by ~petula-faerie:iconpetula-faerie:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


i can push you
from my mind
banish you from my thoughts, my life
but
i cant push you
from my heart

i find it hard to believe
that i can ever release myself
from this hurt
and now i ponder the possibility
of self-infliction,
this mental diction

memories grow thinner
and feelings fade to dusk
but a hollow fills this empty space
one you left behind
with your broken promises

smells
and sights
and sounds

all lead me to this path
contemplative meditation

and i dont want the same things anymore
but desire to hear words you'll never utter
still lingers in my heart

yet now
they're words of a different sort
©2006-2009 ~petula-faerie
:iconpetula-faerie:

Author's Comments

more free writing. doign a lot of it recently aye.

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:iconmrjjn:
~MrJJN Mar 12, 2006, 7:13:54 AM
I dont think you'll ever get those words. *hugs*
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~petula-faerie Mar 12, 2006, 8:22:41 PM
they're not what you think.

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ideals... deception... humanity...
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:iconmrjjn:
~MrJJN Mar 12, 2006, 8:35:49 PM
or maybe they are... hugs are still there.
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~Lone-Soul Mar 12, 2006, 9:13:51 PM
Like your style gets my mind going a bit hey :) and that empty space i think a lot of us have one of them, i find i just get used to carrying an empty space :(
all the best anyways
:iconpetula-faerie:
~petula-faerie Mar 13, 2006, 12:22:58 AM
no, they're really not. trust me. and i know i'll never hear them anyway.

--
ideals... deception... humanity...
[link]
:iconpetula-faerie:
~petula-faerie Mar 13, 2006, 12:23:15 AM
hehe :) thanks

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ideals... deception... humanity...
[link]
:iconmrjjn:
~MrJJN Mar 13, 2006, 2:01:58 AM
:)
well ... i love you anyway.
:iconfairygoth669:
!Fairygoth669 Mar 13, 2006, 2:09:04 AM
I think I also know what that 'empty space' feels like my boyfriend who i was going out with for a year broke up with me and Ive been hurting since then....we can chose to live with the sad memories and good ones that we still miss but we can always make it better.......and next time we most likely find out our true selves in the process. wow im so smart! lol

--
If a man loses his head, I'll but it back on, if he's cut down to size he can still tag along,
he's simply dancing with my undead dance song. (Kagura's dance of the dead.) :butterflytwo:
:iconpetula-faerie:
~petula-faerie Mar 13, 2006, 2:21:19 AM
im glad you found soem meaning in it :)

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ideals... deception... humanity...
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